I found their remnants, drowned and buried
below warm waters and swaying wrecks,
hiding beneath centuries of sand,
their large, starched bones watery tombs.
They were scattered; our hands discarded
their dead in pieces,
the hunt for a loved one
impossible among the spinal columns
of diasporal sorrow.
I could feel their presence,
a large and looming shadow
at the corner of my eye,
accusing my flesh of brutality and
a sadness long forgotten by man.
I found their young there,
the kidnapped ones, slaughtered,
their cries trapped in fine needle bones
that sweep this ocean's floor.
Their songs adrift on currents
in search of a deep shadow
to call home
or a fountain of love
spewed to the trade winds.
Mothers, tasting the blood of their young,
frenzied inconsolable in sonar grief,
love song in throat,
echoed themselves off every surface.
They flung themselves, heaven bent
and hung themselves on our boats,
sacrificed on beaches of men.
I can still hear them calling,
mourning the young, the old, the slow;
a dream haunt,
the wailing of whales














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Yeah. Anymore and I fear I will sound like some awe-struck fan-boy. Great work though, really.
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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
I am glad to have left you speechless, it is somethine us writers strive for, rather than words.
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I am a student of history, so when it comes to anyone's past I firmly believe the old saying "Those who ignore history are doomed to repeat it..."
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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
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"Let your words be fitting".
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"Let your words be fitting".
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my small knowledge of whaling and knowing that you're completely right; one of the impacts moby dick had on me when i read it as a kid; the brilliant word selection you've made for this piece (spinal columns of diasporal sorrow, frenzied inconsolable in sonar grief,).
i think my face just made a small version of the expression it does when i re-read a long-memorized favorite passage of lord of the rings. and that happens very rarely except when i actually am reading it.
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"Let your words be fitting".
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no, i don't think we should be in the middle east.
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