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I found their remnants, drowned and buried
below warm waters and swaying wrecks,
hiding beneath centuries of sand,
their large, starched bones watery tombs.
They were scattered; our hands discarded
their dead in pieces,
the hunt for a loved one
impossible among the spinal columns
of diasporal sorrow.

I could feel their presence,
a large and looming shadow
at the corner of my eye,
accusing my flesh of brutality and
a sadness long forgotten by man.

I found their young there,
the kidnapped ones, slaughtered,
their cries trapped in fine needle bones
that sweep this ocean's floor.
Their songs adrift on currents
in search of a deep shadow
to call home
or a fountain of love
spewed to the trade winds.

Mothers, tasting the blood of their young,
frenzied inconsolable in sonar grief,
love song in throat,
echoed themselves off every surface.
They flung themselves, heaven bent
and hung themselves on our boats,
sacrificed on beaches of men.

I can still hear them calling,
mourning the young, the old, the slow;
a dream haunt,
the wailing of whales
©2007-2009 ~Danteholic
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Author's Comments

Whale Song, or The Wailing of Whales

I come from a culture of whale hunting. When confronted with cow and calf they capture the baby to lure the mother, who, filled with grief, gives herself up. Whenever I hear dolphins call I think of the songs of whales. They use the songs during mating, songs of love.

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Given 2007-05-26

Whale Song by ~Danteholic is a striking lament. (Featured by `PoeticWar)

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:icongelal:
This was shocking, a haunting thing that has me speechless. That doesn't happen much. Absolutely beautiful. The imagery lovely in its disgusting purity.

Yeah. Anymore and I fear I will sound like some awe-struck fan-boy. Great work though, really.

:fella:

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"These things happened. They were glorious and they changed the world... and then we fucked up the endgame." - Congressman Charlie Wilson on the covert war in Afghanistan 1980-1989 .
:icondanteholic:
thanks alot. I am torn between tradition and cruelty. I can't stand to see such wonderful, beautiful creatures suffer...

I am glad to have left you speechless, it is somethine us writers strive for, rather than words.

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
:icongelal:
Yeah.
I am a student of history, so when it comes to anyone's past I firmly believe the old saying "Those who ignore history are doomed to repeat it..."

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"These things happened. They were glorious and they changed the world... and then we fucked up the endgame." - Congressman Charlie Wilson on the covert war in Afghanistan 1980-1989 .
:icondanteholic:
:nod:

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
:iconislandjoe:
Nessie. This is a brilliant piece of writing. Haunting and beautiful. Really evokes the sounds and mystique of whales. A serious indictment of the way whaling is done in BQ.

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:icondanteholic:
my mom sent me a poem some person had written for the whaling station etc,and it was aweful. She was telling me I could do so much better. I was remembering when I went snorkeling one weekend out by whale key, and found tons of fins etc just laying on the ocean floor. Everytime I hear a dolphin call I got scared and went back to the boat! I could feel the whales there, seriously...never felt so guilty of something I hadn't done...I can't remember what prompted this, I think it was just the memory of that visit. I also had a dream where I wrote 2 lines of poetry, but I couldn't remember then the next day, one line went something like "4 sheets to the tradewinds". It is invading my sleep, wicked craft!

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
:iconunfeelingalloy:
wow. few things that I've read lately have left such an impression on me, a feeling mixed of:

my small knowledge of whaling and knowing that you're completely right; one of the impacts moby dick had on me when i read it as a kid; the brilliant word selection you've made for this piece (spinal columns of diasporal sorrow, frenzied inconsolable in sonar grief,).

i think my face just made a small version of the expression it does when i re-read a long-memorized favorite passage of lord of the rings. and that happens very rarely except when i actually am reading it.


:+fav:

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no, i don't think we should be in the middle east.

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:icondanteholic:
thanks alot :)

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
:iconunfeelingalloy:
You're sure welcome - I really did love this.

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no, i don't think we should be in the middle east.

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:iconislandjoe:
i've featured this deviation in my journal... [link]

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