My fields stretched, long and narrow
and yawned on humid afternoons
as I scratched the backs
of my old marshes.
My currents ran clear;
my only dream was to sweep the tops of seas,
to have always sunshine in my nostrils
and salt on my tongue.
You washed up into the may of my life
from some musky badlands.
Mother warned you were nothing
but common salt
not up to the standards
of my fleur de sel pedigree.
I thought to cure you,
to shake the blandness
from your desert eyes,
for you to be the vessel
to hold my deposits,
brackish and raw.
Your love came in small packages
but I stored them
to become my concentrated hoard;
a mine of bitterness.
I cannot name any one deception;
they are infinite, like grains of salt,
held close under my tongue.
I cannot return to my daily grind
All things taste of you
laced in bitterness
You have taken it all, my salt;
not even a grain
to rub this old wound.
You stole
and keep it in the cellar
of your heart
that extra
special ingredient
the seasoning of love.















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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
the play on all things salt is mesmerising and resonates on so many levels... salt = tears, salt = seasoning, salt = whiteness, salt = harshness...
wow...
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
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my blog: [link]
You washed up into the may of my life
from some musky badlands.
Mother warned you were nothing
but common salt
not up to the standards
of my fleur de sel pedigree.
"May of my life" makes perfect sense in the poem. You have so many references and I can see you did your homework in terms of salt mining
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"In the depths of winter, I found within me an invincible summer"
- Albert Camus
"Today well lived makes every yesterday a memory of happiness and every tomorrow a vision of hope. Look well, therefore, to this day..."
- proverb
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
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