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I carry your name
tattooed under my skin.
It has branded me
slave that I am
to the migration of your love.

I am a registered trademark
to hysteria
They say
They cannot see my wounds,
the exits of love
that weep for you.
Their beliefs are rooted
to this earth,
cannot know the miracle
of wax or tongues.
or the harrowing of my flesh
when you stick to every particle
of thought.
Madness, They call
my shrieks,
my birthpangs to rid you
from the columns of my bones.
Invisible stigmata,
They say
the pain is all-in-my-head,
but I feel you here, and here, and here
in each remembered death
of touch, of look,
like a bruise spreading,
like spilled wine.

This heart is porous
and cannot hold
the ecstasy of you.
©2007-2009 ~Danteholic
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this is beautiful nessie..i cant help but sing it..will go great with music :)

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thank holly! I wanted it to be more rammbling, perhaps longer, but I decided I had said all I had to say. The result of reading Freud and Neruda at the same time.

I would like to hear your song of it :) I can hear tori amos chanting it!

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
Tortuous and beautiful. A seemingly jagged spiraling
entropy with smiling heartfelt goodbyes.

I really enjoyed reading this. Thanks.

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"I recognize terror as the finest emotion and so I will try to terrorize the reader. But if I find that I cannot terrify, I will try to horrify, and if I find that I cannot horrify, I'll go for the gross-out. I'm not proud." Stephen King
my song...ha ha nah girl leave that for the professionals..but it is something that can be easily crafted into something melodic and gorgeous

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thanks muchly

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
Awesome work once again. I love how short some of the lines are, but how meaningful they are.

Would definitely go well with music.
thanks a bunch :)

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
this is gorgeous... i agree with holly - there's a very lyrical quality to the rhythm of this...

as usual - love the way you use words...

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:hug:

it will require a tori amos like voice, methinks.

I am having my partay today, got a new dress and everything for it! I am blasting reggae and dancing by myself as I clean!

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X

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