You cannot be the Eve in my garden.
I do not desire your peddling of
apples and signifiers
as the darkness is choking out the moon
and this bridge leads only to Cain.
I am dreaming in symbols again,
and the madness of pills
is not honey enough for this desert.
This bread is not enough,
fed by cloven hands,
dust in my parched mouth.
Leave me alone!
Already the pounding of battle drums
fill my dull(ed) spaces
and all I can hear
is the falling name of Adam.













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a sensitive man... possibly gay...
this is an excellent piece... i am really feeling it... did you piss off your b/f this weekend or something?
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Yes, I am really a gay man. Ha!
No, actually, haven't seen him in about 2 days. He works 2 jobs almost every day, and I work 2 jobs 6 days a week. I am sick and at work, and had a moment of brief feeling-sorry-for-myself mood (it lasted about 20 mins, then I had a sandwich and felt much better). This week has been so aweful I am surprised tears haven't come. I haven't written a moody, non-romantic piece in a while. Thanks for the fav!
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
ahhh if only all sad moods could be alleviated with sandwiches!!!
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my blog: [link]
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
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my blog: [link]
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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
apples and signifiers
as the darkness is choking out the moon
and this bridge leads only to Cain.
How about:
I do not desire your peddling
apples and signifiers
Of darkness choking the moon
and building bridges to Cain.
Love the concept of this poem.
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"Women may fake orgasms, but men fake entire relationships."
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apples and signifiers
as the darkness is choking out the moon
and this bridge leads only to Cain.
How about:
I do not desire your peddling
apples and signifiers
Of darkness choking the moon
and building bridges to Cain.
Love the concept of this poem.
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"Women may fake orgasms, but men fake entire relationships."
Poetry/Fiction: [link]
Astrology: [link]
Artist Free Traffic: [link]
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To be or not to be?
meh, lets just eat some pancakes and call it a day.
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