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Boy,
Your body sucks in the night
heavy as water
Occupying the damp edges
of my room.
I cannot get enough of your hardness,
Your endless well of kisses.
Falling into your silent love
I cannot breathe -
You have stolen the four winds,
And my heart aches for air
Smothered by the sails
That habour me close
Wanting the relief of life
After death
©2005-2009 ~Danteholic
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Georges Bataille meets Pablo Neruda?
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full of romance and love the structure and
story leaves me quite breathless nessie
just beautiful i cant wait to read more from you


welcome to da chicka :P

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beautiful work... am loving the water/ocean metaphor...

slightly confused by "your body SUCKS in the night" though...

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"body sucks in the night" I think I was trying to express how a person can take over a space, so that even the darkness becomes a part of them, and there is no escape...you too must be sucked in....Read Bataille's Erotisme and you will get it! Or read Neruda and you will find it even more confusing...hehehehe.
i am absolutely in love with this.
i love the symbolism about the 4 winds

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thanks :)

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"Let your words be fitting".
Inferno Canto X
thanks....my boyfriend made fun of that part!

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"Let your words be fitting".
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i think its really clever

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