Boy,
Your body sucks in the night
heavy as water
Occupying the damp edges
of my room.
I cannot get enough of your hardness,
Your endless well of kisses.
Falling into your silent love
I cannot breathe -
You have stolen the four winds,
And my heart aches for air
Smothered by the sails
That habour me close
Wanting the relief of life
After death

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Georges Bataille meets Pablo Neruda?

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`hbynoe

Aug 14, 2005, 2:09:09 PM

full of romance and love the structure and
story leaves me quite breathless nessie
just beautiful i cant wait to read more from you

welcome to da chicka

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~Danteholic

Aug 14, 2005, 6:57:56 PM

Thanks Holly!

*IslandJoe

Aug 15, 2005, 5:16:00 PM

beautiful work... am loving the water/ocean metaphor...

slightly confused by "your body SUCKS in the night" though...

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~Danteholic

Aug 15, 2005, 7:35:28 PM

"body sucks in the night" I think I was trying to express how a person can take over a space, so that even the darkness becomes a part of them, and there is no escape...you too must be sucked in....Read Bataille's Erotisme and you will get it! Or read Neruda and you will find it even more confusing...hehehehe.

~YolieOlieAnda

Oct 9, 2005, 3:20:49 PM

i am absolutely in love with this.

~ArdentRequiems

Oct 9, 2005, 5:33:17 PM

i love the symbolism about the 4 winds

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~Danteholic

Oct 10, 2005, 4:59:21 AM

thanks

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~Danteholic

Oct 10, 2005, 5:00:24 AM

thanks....my boyfriend made fun of that part!

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~ArdentRequiems

Oct 10, 2005, 1:15:17 PM

i think its really clever

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